Here's one of my favourite lines from today's editing extravaganza:

He listened to Christophe stretch his beautiful white wings to their fullest, listened to every soft sound of pleasure that slipped from Christophe’s lips like notes in a symphony.

And one that I liked from the original:

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543 for the day (but I was ahead by 1500, at last count, so I don't think it matters) and I finished the story. Now, to read it and find out it sucks! I think I'll save that for tomorrow.


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820 today and about halfway through the final scene. I think it's going well. Maybe. I meant to finish this all in one go, but it's a lot longer than I thought.


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761 for today. I think I only have one scene left in this story. Eep!


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752 today, on a scene that wasn't in my outline.


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767 and yesterday's sex scene done. Woo!


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750. Edited and wrote some smut. OMG HARD TO WRITE SEX.


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952. Two scenes. Ow.


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826 for the day. Pulling teeth at some points, there. Yeowtch.


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838 today. I think I wrote some great sentences today (though the scene itself might, actually, be shit). Rehashed the important bits of backstory, which I think went relatively well. Crawling ever closer to the absolute necessity that I get my ass in the chair to outline the rest of the story.


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